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So I'm having a problem with rewriting, guys, which is basically: I suck at rewriting. I edit as I go, which means that once a story's done I have a really hard time seeing what still needs fixing. Having said that, I *think* this story needs a better balance bewtween the real-world and fairy-tale parts, and possibly needs to be broken up into sections. Concrit would be much appreciated.

When Rina was nine, she saved a fairy kingdom from an evil wizard. )
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The usual caveats apply: this is a first draft, there are places where I suspect more story ought to go. That said, I present:

FROM THE COLLECTION OF THE AMERICAN MUSEUM OF THE NEVERLAND

This is how I was introduced to Eric: my friend pushed me over to him, not gently, and said 'This is Eric. He just got a house!' )
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On my hard drive, I have half-a-dozen unfinished short stories in various flavors of genre, all of which are love stories of one sort or another. I think maybe my November project, in lieu of an actual NaNo, might be getting enough of them done to put together as a little collection.

In the meantime, here's another one I've got mostly finished. I can see a couple of holes where more story needs to go, but I don't know what to put there yet, and it hangs together reasonably well as it is. I think.

Mark works at the northeast edge of the city, in a red-brick warehouse that used to be full of cloth or wheat or spare parts before it was an office building. )

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