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holliSo I think I want to polish up the YA novel I wrote at the end of 2010 and stick it up on the Kindle store, just to get it out there. Towards this end, I would love to have a couple of people read it over and point out any major holes or things that need fixing. Anyone interested? It's 50k and a fairly quick read.
(also, are there any DW comms for original fic? I would love to know about them if there are.)
eta: Okay, so, slightly more information about the novel, and what I'm looking for: it's basically about a girl who reads a lot of SF/F, and finds out that her bratty little sister is the lost princess of a magical kingdom. One of her friends is kidnapped away to said kingdom, and she and her sister have to go and rescue her.
Basically I need someone to read it and tell me a) if it sucks, b) if there are any major holes or lapses and c) catch any minor spelling-and-grammar stuff that I missed. Anyone willing to read it should feel free to do only one or two of those things. A more detailed beta would be much appreciated, but I realize 50k is a bit long for that.
(also, are there any DW comms for original fic? I would love to know about them if there are.)
eta: Okay, so, slightly more information about the novel, and what I'm looking for: it's basically about a girl who reads a lot of SF/F, and finds out that her bratty little sister is the lost princess of a magical kingdom. One of her friends is kidnapped away to said kingdom, and she and her sister have to go and rescue her.
Basically I need someone to read it and tell me a) if it sucks, b) if there are any major holes or lapses and c) catch any minor spelling-and-grammar stuff that I missed. Anyone willing to read it should feel free to do only one or two of those things. A more detailed beta would be much appreciated, but I realize 50k is a bit long for that.
